It might be nice to know which loop was next with a white highlight or something. Also I didn't understand she was remembering until I read the description. I thought the little girl was a granddaughter or something. A prompt "Press E to remember" for the very first cutscene would clear this up.
The shader is beautiful. I'm a big fan of shaders and this one is incredible. Kudos for making it (or finding it, the credits don't say). The only other visual comment I have is it would be fun if the cursor was a little knitting needle. I'm not sure what engine you used, but it should be pretty easy to change in the project settings :).
When she started to remember things after marriage it made me a little upset that there was just work. I would've loved to see a fun interaction with her kid/husband. It was pretty depressing to watch her work and work and work on that computer.
Fantastic submission. Great job!