Very interesting take on the loop ! We all struggle with stuff like this, it was nice to see how you find a way to make it a game. The artwork is beautiful too.
As other said, sometimes it's a little too vague and you don't really know what is expected of you. And then you find the right solution and it skips to the next scene without really explaining what was the rephrasing or so. Maybe with a little more time and work on the text it would be better. You have a strong concept for a narrative game anyway !
goo job on such a short time !