ngl getting scolded by Josh's father felt relatable, I actually FELT that, and wanted to tear up. Loved the update!
Also a quick tip to remembering the difference of your and you're
Your = Something that belongs to you (e.g. your bag, this is yours)
You're = You are (e.g. you're handsome, you're so funny)
just something I noticed in your vn and thought to give a little tip in remembering which one to use. I basically made a game to count how many "your" and "you're" are used in the wrong way haha no offense.