One of the best and most unique game jam games I've played, very polished and very well made in general. Reminds me of "Return of the Obra Dinn" in a lot of good ways. I think my only critique would be that some of the conversations were noticably louder than others, although I could also see that as being intentional. Great job.
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The conversations are different in volume depending on distance from the currently selected microphone. But I assume you're not talking about that. It's pretty likely that the different characters (or even different lines) have different volumes just because of our voice actors being different distances from the mics (and not being professional VA's lol.) We didn't have time to normalize the levels on the 100+ audio files so it just is what it is. It is a little intentional that Alfonso talks louder than Laura, for example. That's just a personality trait of the characters.
Return of the Obra Dinn was definitely an influence, as was Her Story. The story in those games are a bit more compelling, but that's in part because we decided to go for 'functional' rather than 'interesting' in order to make sure the whole thing worked at at least a gameplay level. If we decide to expand on this concept, the first thing I would want to do is come up with some more interesting intrigue lurking under the surface and write better dialogue around that.
Thanks for playing!