Love the limited colour palette and art style. The game feel is immaculate with the audio, and everything works synchronously. The cat picture easter egg's a nice touch, and did I spot the "What remains of Edith Finch" font?
Slight critique would be that the poetry-inspired texts are a little vague and might get lost in translation for the global audience, but I love the effort and thought.
The collision of some assets, in terms of the visuals, made it a little tricky to navigate through the level (the jump over the tree after the fall and the bush near the water parts)
The camera work is *chef's kiss*, but please don't pinhole camera and fade the rest of the level black to this length, I loved the visuals so much that I would love to see more of it.
Overall, loved it and would pay to play more.