Sorry for my English, I might get some words wrong. And remember, it’s all MY opinion, so don’t take that as a fact!
Creativity (4/5) - Mixing the loop theme with repetitive thoughts was a great one! Joana reliving the moments of her live was really a good one. I just think the mechanic is really simple and gets kind of old.
Enjoyment (2/5) - I gotta say, the mechanic is cool and fits in the game theme, but it really gets old quick, with no changes and just getting harder. Maybe something different for the ball, or maybe some different move pattern on the negative thoughts. Also, everything happens so quickly it’s a little hard to process.
Narrative (4/5) - Here is where the game shines. I think you almost nailed it with this, showing the protagonist’s life from start to current day in such a short game. But, as i said above, I just think it’s too quick, even for a jam game. The gameplay is longer than the story, which would not be a problem if it was more varied.
Artwork (2/5) - The art is very very simple, and a bit inconsistent. The low-resolution kinda screws the images too. But I liked the game layout, unconventional but cool.
Audio (5/5) - Music and sound effects would be 3 stars. They’re cool and enhance the game experience. But damn, that dubbing… you really did some good work there! It has a good amount of emotion to it, really cool.
Overall (3.2/5) - You really did have a creative approach to the theme. The story was interesting, and I wish there were more to it. The gameplay, art and pacing are what I personally think were a bit lacking. Anyway, this is the most unique i’ve seen in the jam, so… Good job!