Sorry for my English, I might get some words wrong. And remember, it’s all MY opinion, so don’t take that as a fact!
Creativity (4/5) - Alright, this is peak. Games about “breaking the loop” always enchant me, and you did it greatly! The idea is really good, and the game is simple but has a surprising twist that I really did not expect coming.
Enjoyment (5/5) - The game was really fun to play. At first, it was so simple i thought it was another lazy “play over and over again” thing with no message whatsoever, but when I died in the first level with that creepy as hell death sound, I knew it was going to be interesting. The first glitched scenario following by the level extended to the right, you nailed it! I was genuinely shocked when the camera started showing more map. This was my first 5 star until now, that was really great!
Narrative (4/5) - Probably the aspect that upped the game’s quality the most. The narrative was really fun to experience; nothing really “new”, but having the own game (or something similar) as the villain is always fun if done the right way. And it sure was! It’s long enough to tell the story while also having a good pacing with start, middle and end. Very cool.
Artwork (3/5) - The art is pretty simple, i gotta admit. But what shined was the surprises. Glitched scenarios, anormal sprites, dark ambience… The art was really, really simple, but, as a whole, it turned out good.
Audio (3/5) - The same as the art. Everything is simple, the music is janky and plays again at every different game scene, but hey, that kinda fits the theme after all. It’s the ambience that shines. The villain’s messages sound is cool, the scary sounds throughout the game and battle music at the end were great!
Overall (3.8/5) - My favourite until now. The twist you gave to such a simple game made total difference! This shows that even with simple resources, a good pacing and creative narrative and ambience makes everything. Congratulations!
(I also liked the humor, made me laugh some times. Nothing beats a Jet 2 Holiday)