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Hello.

Posting my first impression of your early/alpha release. So, main plot is the MC lost his phone and got a new one with the first message being from his girlfriend who's a streamer. I'm sorry, but this is hardly "original" (what is, nowadays?...). Having said that, I'm still interested in seeing/playing wherever you're taking this.

Use of AI art isn't particularly a positive selling point either, as there are users who will post their complaints about that; as for me, as long as the characters and so on aren't with impossible bodies, erogenous "parts" apart lol, it's cool. Still, FWIW, if this project of yours kicksoff well or steadily grows with a fanbase, I suggest considering hiring an artist instead.

A bug I got, was that none of the emojis on the texts loaded, just that white icon. The context of the messages however made it easy to guess which emoji was supposed to show up most of the times, so no big deal, methinks...

Main plot-wise, were it me I'd slow down a bit her adoption of more-skin equals more-viewers. Giving agency to the player in supporting her to do it lends credence, but perhaps a somewhat-more organic approach, like watching what other streamers are doing (and not just of the female gender), talking with her friends, thnking about it over the course of days, that sort of thing. Having said that, if this is the tale you want to tell, then go for it.

As for me, following.

Cheers!

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Thank you very much for taking the time to give me your first impressions!

I will work on the bug with the emoji, and I would like to spend more time on the art as well, yes. The story-line will be worked on for pacing, but there is a lot of future story line to get through!  Don't underestimate Alex! 

Yes, My Girlfriend Streams - NTR - is and has been inspired by other great games in the VN gender and I really hope it is a welcomed, enjoyable spin.  

I understand if the story feels rushed at the start, but selecting different reply options often gives very different replies, each string can help learn about her character and what drives her!

In a future update, there will be the ability to "watch" some of the streams, yes, and there will be more characters introduced, some with their own separate plots lines as well. 

Thank you again for your interest, and I hope you enjoy how the game develops!