hey, wasn't sure where else to put this, but i found an error in the coding! it's at the inn after you go to the market and choose a gift -- i don't remember what chapter i'm currently on where i found it, apologies -- but it's when zahn comes to your room and you can decide if you still feel romantic feelings for him or if it's just friendship, given you've previously decided that you're feeling all romantical toward him, lol. anyway, if you choose to change it to being just friends, the coding is missing an '<' at the start of it, i believe. 'tis attached in the screenshot below to show:
oh, and another thing i found just now. you used the wrong name here in the beginning of the second paragraph -- should be "aster" rather than "jasper". this is only a little later in the same chapter as the one above. love your story, and i hope these comments help you! <3
(and yes, i did change it to dark mode for this screenshot whereas the first one was light mode. found the button in the settings menu lol, forgot that it was there.)