Rating time!
Overall: 2 - I really appreciate you putting something out at all! This looks really neat and I'd love to see you return to this concept in a format you can finish. Unfortunately though, as you know better than me, this wasn't able to make it across the finish line, and it shows pretty hard. It's a real shame, I think this was off to a really cool start!
Gameplay: 2 - I don't know if a couple dialogue choices and Harold hiding behind a tree even really qualify as gameplay, but in the very least it wasn't upsetting or difficult to get through, so a 2 it is!
Music: 2 - I actually don't think there was any music here, although I think the silence did well to set the atmosphere.
Graphics: 3 - Honestly, putting aside the unfinished-ness of it, everything here looks really cool! I like the cute robot you play as, the atmosphere is neat, and I think the title screen is a total highlight. I really wish I could see what your plan was for this because the title screen and intro have some really cool implications.
Story: 3 - This is a stretch, but the intro was really strong, and it made me really hype to see what was gonna be in here. I went in expecting basically nothing, and then I was given something REALLY COOL, followed immediately by... nothing. And I'm gonna go ahead and say that on a meta level that's really cool even if it wasn't intended. The story appears to be about unfinished stories and it itself is an unfinished story, and I just have to deal with the frustration of that. Very meta.
Comedy: 2 - This is no laughing matter!
It's really unfortunate this didn't make it out the oven finished, but I again really appreciate you putting it out anyway. There's the promise of something really cool here, and unlike other games that are finished but have severe flaws, this one's only flaw is that it's incomplete, so I really hope something can come from what's left of this in the future! Thanks for submitting!