I'm in awe with the art style and how well it supplements the fun ideas presented here.
Here's what I got from proofreading the document:
- "Inside." (spread 2, A6. Garden Shed) There's an unintended line break here.
- "Gale the Gardner." (spread 2, A6. Garden Shed) Gardner instead of Gardener.
- "roll on the treasure table twice." (spread 2, Items) If this refers to the treasure tables of the system you are running, you might want to add that info. The effect and encounter tables are also referred to in this way, but are found within the document itself, unlike said treasure table.
- Formatting. (spread 2, Random Tables) The first result of both tables is indented and I'm not sure if this is intended as it looks a little off.