'And yes, the Cloaked Silhouette will be romancable too ;)' <-- say. LESS.
Overjoyed; humbled; rattling bars of enclosures. I think I mentioned previously how much I love romance and - yoooo, am I excited how THIS One will play out! Esp since I play my baby forest hermit as super Guarded/No Risks type (with a begrudgingly good heart feedin her ungrateful keeds). Also interested why Silhouette would be attracted -- well, no. Why *wouldn't* you fall for an Awesome QUEEN? (I'm not biased, you're biased)
I think you nailed everything you were going for with this chapter; 'A Crack in the Wall' is a fab title. Not only her own wall -- but the wall of the 'perfect' world she's built hiding away from the world and trash people (#Goals). It all seems like it's falling apart, all at once and you see she realizes she can't stop it; so -- let's save as much as we can and take as many as we can down with us. I like MCs that are quite aware the Real World isn't kind and something *WILL* be lost, but dammit - "I'mma lose Well."
(Don't have tantrums over your backgrounds, lovely -- from one art keed to another. You're great at what you do. *pat pats* ❤️) Srsly: I'm so impressed you're not only writing all this, but serving awesome visuals as well - hot damn~
Props to boyfriend -- send my regards. Completely agree. I'm sure it was so much harder on you; but I can say I would have lost a Lot of enjoyment feeling railroaded into helping Prisoner for no good reason (esp given how I'm building my MC). Surprisingly, I did end up regenerating him -- but it was *MY* choice. And I liked the reasons you gave for it: To - not knowing why the heck to - 'it felt like I had to do it, bro'. Not just being a nice person for nice sake. Do whatever's best for you, but I say, if you ever come up with a better idea for something -- never feel afraid to edit your baby! We're all aware it's a work in process~ Making it the best you can is nothing but an act of love and you should be able to play in your sandbox however you want to.