This was eerie and fun! it reminds me of liminal spaces stuff - all the creepy things. like, why is there this weird brown stained corner with a bunch of chairs or a computer of whatever?! and the odd, almost haphazard design layout, the desire to be able to sprint, but you can't.... if this had been a horror or existential crisis jam, this would rule! i loved the art and music, they fit too. overall very fun experience.
if you do ever turn this into something creeper, maybe add something that like, stalks you or some effect that kills you if you take too long?