Who played bass on the track '3', or is that just a loop?
Honestly I think you could do a lot more without the heavy reliance on loops and construction kits. I can definitely hear some potential, but there's quite a lot of unintentional dissonance in your tracks which might not entirely work in your favor. Most of it sounds heavily layered and thrown together rather than painstakingly written, if that makes any sense.
This isn't all bad, though, and I think you have a lot of potential. If you ever need help finding that cohesion, I'd be glad to help.