The piano rolls feel like flowing water and together with the ticking metronome-like sound, this is a very clever way of depicting the flow of time the way that the threads are shown in the image you chose. I think your chord progression, particularly in the A section and the repeat with the strings, is particularly beautiful given the classical yet unpredictable nature. The melody makes so much sense but also goes where it wants, another great way to portray someone weaving time. The second half uses a stepwise progression which is somewhat more predictable, still with intrigue, making me imagine that the initial weaves are turning into a full cloak of time and it is a little easier to see the formation of the final product. Harmonically, the stacked perfect fifths in the ostinato and the use of the dorian mode give the sense of the mythic nature of the artwork, adding a feeling of wonder that helps accompany the colossal stellar being sitting among the galaxies in space weaving time. What a beautiful image and an equally beautiful piece of music to match. Excellent work and thank you for sharing.