The ability to clearly show the scene of someone walking down from the rain into a rave is great! I think that the piece would benefit from being 1-2min shorter, however. When we were near the rave, the music was very similar from about 1:30 to 3:05 and we didn't get to hear clearer aspects of the rave until 3:06 which lasted until about 3:39. There was a lot of build up for about 1.5 to 2 minutes and the payoff was very short at about 30 seconds. I think as a piece telling the story of someone approaching but then not interested in the rave, it's super clear and great! As a track though, I would have liked to hear a lot more payoff for the 3-minute build up.
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This is excellent feedback thank you! I was definitely treading a line between soundscape and soundtrack! I do agree it is a bit lengthy but wanted to emphasise the feeling of travelling through a scene and felt it needed that slow transition, I wanted to keep the rave part simple and decided to keep it short so it didn’t become too repetitive, if it was in game I would have it linked to gameplay and character position rather than a set length