Really fun game! I was surprised that this wasn't a Honey Heist hack and personally am glad that you went your own way with it. More games should be based in New Zealand and include penguins. I'll attempt to assemble all my Kiwi mates and run a one shot, I reckon authentic accents will really make it sing.
Only bit of feedback I'd have is that it would be nice to clarify what being "unconscious" entails. Can the others attempt to bring you back, what is the risk etc. etc. You can also use the back of the page for some fun tables to help the FM create a heist!