This game was really beautiful. Exploring the impacts of climate change through something as small and ordinary as a fish was a creative way to go about this and I really enjoyed it. Your writing is compelling and poetic, and I ached with the fish as she struggled to understand why she was alone and the effects of climate change on her home. I think even with you having to cut down the length, the story is still very impactful. I wanted to see the fish succeed so badly despite the disaster she was experiencing, and it pained me to not be able to save her, but I think that was a really good ending to the story because it's a real effect of climate change. If you continue this I think music would benefit the story greatly and make it even better than it already is, but other than that I think you've created an absolutely beautiful game.