there are some unpolished parts and notable bugs, like the game scene which isnt centered on the screen, and personally the story is too short (blame it on the jam tho lol) (I like the story concept of teenagers who are going on self-existensialism phase (I suppose)), but I think it could be better if you would develop it further! I see there is a potential in this game, if you are willing to spend your time and sanity to develop it :v
(anyway, icl the artstyle is so cool, love it!)