To think there are people out there who'd want to read weird, kinky stuff with girls fucking each other in it... God, could you even imagine? What a bunch of depraved freaks they must be~
First and foremost, those backgrounds! I want to say this is the first VN I've ever seen where not only the backgrounds are fully 3D rendered in real time, but the (seamless!) transitions between scenes are as well—and with such a surreal, visually striking style, no less~ It helps tremendously in giving the scenario a dreamy, preternatural air, heheheh.
I also loved the soundtrack, especially the tracks that play during the sequence with Chari and Demi in the bathroom! Music that feels like it has something deeply wrong with it is always so much fun, doubly so when it's used to suggest the same about a character, place, or situation, ahahaha~
Congratulations on completing your first kinetic novel! I'm very much looking forward to sinking my teeth into the final release, whenever it may appear~