I really like this game and it has great storytelling. It has great visuals and I look forward to seeing any games you make in the future :)
Just a couple of very minor things make the gameplay a bit clunky for me (but I also don't particularly play narrative games).
The text scrolling audio is a little high pitched for me. Also, I agree speeding up/allowing skip for the text would be good. The game feels like it is slower then it needs to be but again, not a big narrative game player.