This was wonderful! Selica was such a fun character to focus on, I love her attitude and stubbornness... all the characters really, are very well written. Eleanor is very interesting; I'd love to see more of her relationship with both Selica and Ludmilla. Honestly, I'd love to see more of these characters and this world in general! It was just really fun and exciting!
Also I wanna compliment you on the great sprites, and how well written the action scene was; very cool stuff! This is a wonderful debut for you and I'm excited to see more! ^^