Let's trade feedback! I submitted a project too.
- Gameplay: Nice Micro-RPG style game. I like that your intro is more cinematic, with the magician telling us instead of a wall of text. I like explorer elements where I have to go around town to collect clues on what to do from villagers. Instead of just fighting enemies all the time. It's more immersive that we start in the village too.
- Visuals: Great use of the Tiny Dungeon and pixel packs. You overworld map is nicely laid out and appealing to the eye. It's very clear you've done things by-hand, which I'm glad to see instead of bland level generation. Your effort shows.
- Audio: Sounds, music and audio cues work well. Nothing major to point out here.
- Future: You can so easily expand this world. It reminds me of the gameboy final fantasy and chrono trigger worlds. Make this a nice micro-game with funny moments and other simple towns to explore. Aim for a bite-sized experience and I think you could experience alot with enemies, escort missions, simple mini bosses and collect item missions.