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Congrats on the release. Now its my turn. (to release, get it...get it?)

Jokes aside, here's my (very) succinct review:

What I liked:

- Renders and animation, character design, background etc. The only flaw I would point out in terms of rendering, is Rumi's hair. Probably because its of a lighter colour, those little strands, especially on the top of her head is rather noticeable. Using the background photo of this page (Rumi on left) as a reference.

- Dialogue and comedy. Unique personalities, funny quips and narration. (Was trying to figure out why starting a new game still had the rickroll playing).

Neutral/dislike(?):

- Plot: Obviously, this comment is only for 0.1p1. Interesting intro and set up, but the amount of content is a little too short to really give any feedback or opinion at all. 

- End of version: There is no cliffhanger, just a hanger (cuz it left me hanging, haha...). It just kinda ended randomly.

Edit: Just read the progress report, my apologies. Might be worth adding a little disclaimer at the end of update to clarify on that so people aren't wondering why it ended so abruptly.

Thanks for your review, honestly her hair is pretty special and I don't want to replace it at the moment even though it's pretty "off". Also looking for ways to improve it