Congrats on the release. Now its my turn. (to release, get it...get it?)
Jokes aside, here's my (very) succinct review:
What I liked:
- Renders and animation, character design, background etc. The only flaw I would point out in terms of rendering, is Rumi's hair. Probably because its of a lighter colour, those little strands, especially on the top of her head is rather noticeable. Using the background photo of this page (Rumi on left) as a reference.
- Dialogue and comedy. Unique personalities, funny quips and narration. (Was trying to figure out why starting a new game still had the rickroll playing).
Neutral/dislike(?):
- Plot: Obviously, this comment is only for 0.1p1. Interesting intro and set up, but the amount of content is a little too short to really give any feedback or opinion at all.
- End of version: There is no cliffhanger, just a hanger (cuz it left me hanging, haha...). It just kinda ended randomly.
Edit: Just read the progress report, my apologies. Might be worth adding a little disclaimer at the end of update to clarify on that so people aren't wondering why it ended so abruptly.