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My comment was at the time of version 1.0.

As for me being the smartest guy in the room, well, I have yet to meet someone who outsmarts me.

And rejecting my criticism because of my personality demonstrates your inability to actually counter it.

So does relying onto numbers rather than actual facts.

Can you honestly deny that you kept breaking the fourth wall in Chasing Sunsets and thus that you kept pulling players out of your story or that all of your characters share a single personality which is yours nerdy one?

Did you genuinely expect players to believe in your world where everyone is tuned at the same frequency, knows the same nerdy references and makes the same nerdy jokes?

In the end, it doesn't matter if you accept my feedback or reject it because of my personality, because the fact remains that you failed to create a believable world because you failed to create diversity in it since you failed to design divergent personalities than yours and you kept sabotaging immersion in your world because of your frequent fourth wall breaking which do break immersion whether you acknowledge it or not doesn't change the fact.

vegav234 days ago

Dude get a grip, noone cares. Fact is, this is one of the best story-focussed Daz AVNs on the market.

Have you even played the conclusion? How can you even attempt to critique a game you haven't completed?

You're entitled to your opinion as much as anyone else but my opinion is that you are not even close to being the smartest person in the room....as if that was even up for debate in the first place!

Maxime Martyr4 days ago

It always amuses me every time someone cares to answer that they don't care. 😂

You are free to enjoy a world where everyone shares a collective mind and I am free to not.

I already acknowledged that I stopped after version 1.0 but was it not the conclusion already and the following content is it not an aftermath of the conclusion?

vegav234 days ago

Glad you are amused at least.

No, the conclusion was not in v1.0, which was Chapter 9, the conclusion is in Chapter 10, v1.10.

Obviously nobody is going to force you to play something that you obviously didn't enjoy but your opinion on a game is likely to be vastly more respected should it be based on the entire game, as opposed to just the snippet that you decided to play.

That said, if only for your further amusement, may I reiterate that I'm unlikely to care about your opinion whether you play the final chapter or not

Maxime Martyr3 days ago

90% of a story is a "snippet" of it to you? I'm sure Stone Fox Studios appreciates this consideration of their years-long story-development. 😏

Moreover, the fact that I missed the last chapter may nullify my opinion of rushed conclusion however it doesn't change anything to my other feedback about immersion's sabotage by constant fourth wall breaking nor unbelievability of a world where everyone shares a single mind.

Sure you may reiterate to your heart's content and I will reiterate that you are unlikely to be taken seriously when you care enough to answer that you don't care. 😂

vegav233 days ago

To me, a snippet is any extract or part, specifically when the omission of the remainder results in a lack of context or an ill-formed opinion.

The fact that you missed the last chapter doesn't just nullify your opinion of a rushed conclusion, it completely and utterly invalidates it.

Not that your opinion means much when the only other two snippets of critique you have offered both lack factual accuracy.

Honestly, if you failed to immerse yourself in this story or see the personality differences between different characters, that leads less to any flaw on the part of the creator and more to a key flaw in your comprehension.

Before I go, I will briefly reflect on how cute it is that you think I give a flying monkey's about your opinion.

These replies are not intended to stroke your delicate ego, but to serve as a rebuttal to your invalid and inaccurate critique which is based on your own inability to comprehend a well told story. My comments are aimed to others who may see your initial comment and, at least until they read one or two of your other replies, somehow draw the conclusion that you are not the dumbest person in the room.

These comments of mine serve merely as the spoonful of sugar required to mask the bitterness of your tonic. On this final note, I bid you good day

Maxime Martyr3 days ago (1 edit)

You made so little sense that I didn't even bother to read half of your comment because my rational mind couldn't bear your nonsensical monologue.

vegav232 days ago

You couldn't finish reading Chasing Sunsets. Why am I not surprised you struggled to finish reading my comment.

Perhaps you might find tutoring fruitful.

In any case Max, toodle-oo 👋🏾

Maxime Martyr2 days ago

I finished reading what was available until now and I did not struggle to read it because it made sense even if it was not very credible unlike your petulant tantrums, may I remind you that the author stated himself that he just released the last chapter a few days ago? And yet you keep pestering me about not having read it yet even though one more chapter will not change all of the story's flaws because this is all you can hold onto since you want to contradict me without reason like the insufferable brat that you definitely are.

vegav232 days ago

Blah blah blah, blah blah blah, blah blah.

Interesting argument, hope you had as much fun typing it as I did reading it.

Toodle-pip

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