That's a nice game, I think you should make the camera follow the player because certain parts of the levels feel unfairly harder because you can't see the other part of the level until you get there.
For example, in the level with the grappling hook I assumed you need to fall into the pit but I fell to the spikes and died because I couldn't to see them.
I also think you shouldn't allow every button to be used to skip dialogue but rather one button that you would specify in game.
Great game overall, good job!