Thanks so much for your honest review! No worries at all, I really appreciate constructive criticism, and I actually agree with the points you made! :)
In my defense, I haven’t written anything in over 15 years, so I kind of expected my writing to be a bit rusty and to have some flaws. That’s why I was honestly surprised that most people seemed totally happy with Day 1, haha.
I’d love to update the chapter, but the problem is that there are already several translations done by native speakers. Any changes I make would mean all those translations would also need to be updated, which I hadn’t really considered at the time. (And honestly, translations weren’t even on our radar for a first-time project, it overwhelmed me a little bit 😅)
Since the translations are done by volunteers, not all of them will stick around or stay in contact with me. For the next chapters, I’ll probably hold off on allowing translations until I’m really satisfied with the English script. So unfortunately, I can’t promise that Day 1 will get another update. With even more languages being added, it would be way too much for me to handle all the retranslation work on my own 😔
All I can promise is that I’ll do my best to make the next chapters tighter and improve the overall flow. Thanks so much for playing and for enjoying it anyway <3
- holyschnitzel