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Hi.

These are my impressions after playing the version at the time of this post, which I'm guessing it's the first upload at itch.io.

Overall, it's a light introduction. Nora's admission in "finding it easy to chat with the MC" is a bit weird, since they just met and what little dialogue they had just then wasn't anything potentially cringe-worthy. No full blown confessions either, so maybe it would make more sense for a few more chats at different times, or even a Nora-then either Mina or Alex-and again Nora, something to demonstrate that the MC is earning her trust. Food for thought.

Also, at the bar, first Mina seems reluctant but strangely turned on with the MC's permission to flirt with guys to network. And right then she's getting all cozy and cute with a random dude and going into the restroom with him? True, she's buzzed (or more) but still seems a bit weird, maybe even going too fast? Will that be a possible ending, go too fast with sharing Mina and get burned, so to speak? (please don't answear if you don't want to post spoilers! lol)

As for Alex, if the MC gets "closer" to her, I wonder if Mina will be willing to share, or if that's an only path for cheating. I'm not going back to try again, but I'm curious if it will be possible for threesomes with MC and Mina and Alex, or make Mina a "cuck", lol.

Then there's the possibility of maybe sharing Mina with the MC's best friend/group of friends. Posting pictures on a social web with or without Mina's knowledge, perhaps? What about asking Mina to help the MC getting a promotion by going on "illicit" dates with his boss?

These are just ideas I've had after playing, don't mind the mumbling...

Anyway, following, I'm very curious how you're planning to develop this project. I hope you'll enjoy the process and make something you're proud of!

Cheers!

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Hey Tripple Eff! 

Thanks a lot for your in depth thoughts on the game!! It's really awesome to hear your thoughts on character behavior and future content!

Regarding Nora:

Fun fact: She's the character that got the most changes during development.  The "Finding it easy to chat"-part should kinda show her relief that the situation didn't turn out as awkward as she imagined it to be. In theory (not sure if I was able to bring it across) Nora is a more introvert and reserved person. That's why she's glad she could trust the MC. I'll reread the part and see if there's a way to make it more clear what I was trying to imply... Maybe there's more dialogue needed to introduce her intentions/personality properly!

Regarding Mina (WARNING: MINOR SPOILER)

You're right I can't give too much information without spoiling the future versions :D All I can say is that the first chapter shows Mina's personality quite well. So if you've got the feeling that things go (too) fast there might be a good reason for it! This will be something that's going to be discovered in the next update. I promise (or hope lol) things will make sense after playing the next version! 

Regarding Alex:

You know her by now - She's definitely up for adventures x) Based on the choices made there's a  good chance the friendship will grow even closer. We will see how Mina will react to things once she realizes that!

Regarding future content:

You mentioned very interesting ideas! All I want to share for now is that future content should ideally be something that hasn't been seen/read other games of the NTR/NTS genre. We will probably see more scenes that revolve around the idea of Stellanova working on their popstar careers. But I also want to include interesting "everyday life" scenarios to offer more variability.

Hope you're staying on board!!

Greetings

Donut