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I've gotta be honest: I have a soft spot for girls with those big, dorky swirly glasses; always have, always will.  So you already know that Sable was immediately my favorite member of the cast, heheheh~

My favoritism aside,  this one was interesting.  The portrait art for the characters was charming throughout, of course, and I always appreciate when VNs color-code the dialogue to each character~  Also, I think this is the first VN I've ever read where one of the main characters was basically just ChatGPT—and a very scary ChatGPT that ends up riding around in the body of a cute girl, at that, heh.

I'd love to revisit this one once you've rested up and had the opportunity to circle back around and finish everything for it the way you'd envisioned it~  I'd love more screentime for my girl Sable, naturally, but thinking back on the one CG sketch we see near the end, I've no doubt the VN would really pop with more fullscreen art like that (and perhaps some more music, too)~

But yes, nicely done, doubly so for a first-time jam game!

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When we were determining the scope of the novel for the jam, we ultimately decided against a "personality choice / multiple route"-based story in favour of a more "focused obsession"-based one, but we did so pretty late.

So, while Sable started as only the exact trope you've a soft spot for; dorky swirly glasses, she drifted and marinated in my brain for a really long time compared to the lines she is written into - really excited to bring to bear all her dorky depravity!