Hi.
Just wanted to leave a very quick "review" of the current version at the time of this post, Eden chapter 3.
Resumedly, it's an interesting game. The story isn't exceptionally original, it feels like it takes bits and bobs from here and there, but, unlike most AVN, yours make a good plot and sub-plots, captivating and (nearly) solid.
There are several moments in the narration and dialogues that could use some polish, like npc's getting info that they themselves shouldn't have or doesn't make much sense how they're jumping to the right conclusions out of scraps. But these are minor, IMO. As this is your first project (or one of them, anyway) there is some room for errors and lack of expertise the more typical professional script-writers get. *shrugs*
The combat needs some touching, I casted Healing on a NPC but it only showed it when another NPC would attack or cast a spell next, which left me wondering how many hitpoints the healing had restaured.
Beyond that, not much more to add. The graphics of the npcs are great, the background not so much. The animations are good, too. You guys have the humour balanced with the nastier aspects of the plots, but it comes to a point where too much starts feeling contrived and just filler, which diminishes the geveral impression of the game itself.
Definitely following, very curious to see where this will all lead to.
Cheers!