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I have a unique track, it's not finished but I would like some advice from anyone willing to give theirs

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Nice map, really like the scenery and the bait at the end xd.

No obvious cuts I can see.

If I had to make a comment,  the uphill to the right is very easy to jump out of the map so maybe add a mushroom to block that. 

Directly after that, it is difficult to make the tight turn, but that's up to you. 

very fun map to play, I have wr for now but am sure that will change very soon.

I don't see any cuts. I would add some more details (for example waves in the river) so it feels more alive. 

The only problem is the end. I also really like the bait, but the loop isn't fully smooth and I've bounced out a few times. Here is how I would change the end:

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Yes thank you, I forgot to mention it, the end is painful, when you just bounce of the unsmooth loop for no reason.

thank y'all for the help :D!