I had myself, and 3 others looking over it. We used Google docs for spelling though it kept trying to change the tense to past tense.... I'll admit my spelling is... shit lol like its crap. I'm bad at that. My dialect is also probably a bit weird as well as I was raised by Newfoundlanders. But I didn't want to wash away my voice too much with "Proper English"
If you'd like you could join the discord and we could talk a bit more about this :) See what can be done.