Wonderful! It's great to see the development of both Aurora and Heidi, as well as the mysterious pink haired girl. I could easily fall head over heels for any of those women! Heh, and another teacher for us to crush on....
We'll probably have to choose or get our butts kicked won't we? I'm picturing some guy in a body cast going "worth it!" LOL! We'll lose at least a little bit no matter what we do, but any choice is a win!
What you did with Christina was honestly one of a very short list of the hottest things I've seen in an FMG VN, and it raises certain tantalizing possibilities with her in particular....
There are still spots where I think some verb tenses might be wrong and you can kind of tell the writer probably isn't a native English speaker, but it's noticable because of how rare it is. The characters, however, are amazing!
The cameos are great fun, and more varied than I expected! So many beloved ladies....
As much as I have an instinct to dislike her, I do want to see more development with Miranda. All of these characters have had deeper layers, and it would be nice if someone could help her deal with her insecurities (and her lousy way of handling them) without having to side with her against much more wholesome love interests. Heh, I have a soft spot for redemption arcs, but the trick is finding a way to help her without seeming to support her nastier tendencies.
Especially since she *definitely* deserved to get pummelled by a pascifist, and THAT'S saying something....
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Hey there Dood!
Thank you so much for your nice and thoughtful review! It really made me smile and I'm so glad about everything you wrote! ⸜(｡˃ ᵕ ˂ )⸝♡
You're right about that, I'm not a native English speaker so I'm aware that there will some phrasal errors here and there, but thank you kindly for understanding! (๑ᵔ⤙ᵔ๑)
So... About Miranda. Since her route is still deep in WIP i have bigger plans for her, because she has a massive major role in her route. I really hope that, once we're getting there, you'll be satisfied with the aftermath of anything going on with her. If we are going to draw a comparison with another famous VN, Miranda's route could be probably the 'Heaven's Feel' route of the Fate/Stay Night (⸝⸝> ᴗ•⸝⸝)