It's nice to hear, but it doesn't sound spooky or scary overall.
(does anyone remember that it's a haunted house-like building...?)
Of course, I'm just expressing my thoughts, not that it's bad to have these haha
Sounds more like... The final floor or something.
I don't know how to express it...
Something like..
... In the halls of the dungeon...
...The hero evaded countless guards to finally reunite with...
wait.. that story... the Story! OH THE STORY.is that the story?? stroy... str.. THE STO-