The writing has a great personality. It is a direct, snappy, fast feeling dialog. It reminds me of this tv show called Dragnet 67. I liked how the girls talked back and forth fast like clever detectives, with romantic comments mixed into their detective talk. There’s so much momentum when they speak and when MC thinks, bouncing on each idea swiftly. The game has two mysteries unfolding at the same time. There is the lighthouse magic mystery and there are the mysterious details of the two girls relationship. Both mysteries felt fun to discover. The art is wonderful and the girls designs are sweet. Thanks for sharing this.
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Thank you so much!! I personally haven't watched Dragnet (though I do know about it) but I have watched lots of similar shows and movies. I love the detective dynamic so I'm happy I was able to capture it for you!
I had a lot of fun writing these two mysteries in tandem and I'm especially happy to hear that from someone who isn't already familiar with the characters (as most of my friends are). I hope you will come back to experience the rest of the story when it is fully implemented <3