LOVE the visual presentation here. really great concept.
i appreciate stories that jump right into the conflict like pressure cooker does. there's the immediate tension and frustration, and the setup is really easy to immediately understand so it works well. the hatred between these two is palpable, and their personalities (especially regarding how they act in a crisis under stress) are evident really quickly. i also really like how i can feel that theyve been bottling up a lot of resentment towards each other for a long time.
theres fantastic artwork in this. i wasnt expecting the expressions to get so intense.
holy shit, the buildup with the fight and them rolling around on the floor was awesome. i loved seeing the line used again against nicole. i also really loved seeing her give in. that was incredible how quickly she changed her tone. i honestly love both of their personalities and how they handled this.
GREAT ENDING.
thank you so much for making this, so so so so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!