intense and oppressive atmosphere created by the writing style, ambiance, and the illusion of choice dialogue options. i really enjoyed how this was written. the feeling of panic and overwhelm was very strong, but so is the lust and the eagerness to be used and manipulated. when the delirium increases steadily, the descriptions of what bodily sensations are felt are really well done and immersive. i also really enjoy the nonstandard formatting and line breaks used to emphasize the rhythm of the protagonists thoughts
part of what i really like here is the focus on yearning for someone who wants you very deeply. theres also the focus on being a small, petite girl compared to a powerful and domineering partner. the nearly complete lack of care for bodily health in the pursuit of pleasure is very sexy, but the focus on being dressed like a cute doll is also very sexy
ina is really an interesting character, isnt she? i feel a connection to her and empathy.. but wow, zero self-preservation skills make me nervous for her. shes absolutely perfect for this story.
i found a typo in the line "...Is she even a vampire, or is she just lieing to me as she bites me again and again" (correct to lying)
the art is part of what drew me into this story as well. im a big fan of the outfits here and the bloody effects. one thing i would have really loved is for the expressions on demis face to be drawn when she is angry and shouting.
the ending made me sad, but in a good way. also it would be great if the ending screen would lead back to the main menu page.
well done, everybody!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thoroughly enjoyable experience <3 <3