I feel like there's way too much to read here. It sounds like this could be quite a fun mission to play, but there's definitely a lot that's being squished into one page. The concept is neat. The writing could use a very minor amount of clean-up.
Unfortunately I'm going to be a bit nit-picky and say that this is a very long and complex mission for a Jam that has an objective of being, "clear, simple, and interesting."
The inclusion of printables is quite cool.
There's a one page story too!
However there is no moodboard.
A lot of effort has gone into the submission and it's very good. I just think it's missing the mark on this jam's theme.