Rules are neatly and clearly presented.
My only gripe is calling the supplies that the units seize from the obj. markers "temporary VPs." This threw me off a bit. Maybe something more along the lines of scoring 1 VP for each "supply" carried to the board edge could work.
I also know from experience that "carry the objective" missions are often unpopular (in my circle anyways).
This mood board is so cool. Love it that the colour tone matches throughout.
All in all, this is a very good submission.