absolutely! when i said the art was simple, it was not a criticism, but rather- the simpleness of how it looks should not make anyone think it is not complex or heartfelt (and like you said, it allows the story to be read clearly and directly). i have edited my previous comment to reflect that 🙂
i did notice the clothes changing, that was a nice touch! and yes, i think the ending did seem uplifting ultimately! i was happy vara was able to express her identity, regardless of the aftermath.
i did also see that vara must have cared about leah, in her smile, as you said. and in the jokes and teasing they shared, although it sometimes devolved into fighting. i thought that was a very realistic portrayal, that lots of friendships that start at a young age especially can end up like this. but yes, i agree showing more of the softness between them would have strengthened it even more!
thanks so much for sharing your thoughts, and i hope you enjoyed your time creating for the jam.