Love this game, and both Citizen Sleeper games, too — they’re masterpieces!
I did find some typos/errors in v1-02:
- Panel 2 > //HITTING AN INTERSECTION: Seems like “intersection” should be capitalized in the first sentence of this section.
- Panel 2 > //HITTING AN INTERSECTION: “…setting up and tacking…” Should the emphasized word be “tracking” or “tackling”?
- Panel 2 > //DELIVERY: Likewise, should “destination” be capitalized as well?
- Panel 2 > //DELIVERY: “… and failed it, subtract -5 from the payout.” Adding the emphasized word could improve clarity.
- Panel 3 > //CLOCKING OFF + CYCLE END: “You can also visit the Bikeshop you may make any upgrades.” Should this be “to make any upgrades”?
- Panel 4 > //ROLLING HAULERS: This sentence should be capitalized: “add two more dice towards the middle…”
- Panel 4 > //PLAYING AN INTERSECTION: “on the SIDE your have entered from…” should be “you,” not “your”.