Love the art, music and writing. I agree with rightdress that the Disney World scene is a standout. I appreciate that the game is a linear story but the player is given the choice whether to engage with each NPC or not. I'm wondering if there will be more minigames like keeping the beehive steady. Also I wish the text box didn't cover so much of the gorgeous background art, and perhaps the font could be slightly more interesting (it's currently very readable however, so I don't want to discount that).
Great job all around and can't wait to play the full game.