Some thoughts:
- It seems a bit problematic to make the uneven point values optional, as it leaves unclear whether the rest of the mission was balanced with or without the bonus points for the attacker in mind (though my initial assumption would be the latter). I also think that additional points are too abstract to be interesting on the thematic level as the option suggests; I expect this option to mostly go unused for the sake of fairness unless the defender specifically desires a handicap for some reason.
- Does a unit being deployed via They are in the Walls! count as having just entered a building? RAW I would suppose so, but it feels weird on a thematic level since the idea is that they've been hiding there all along.
- Table # 1 — the entry references an "Entangled" condition but this isn't defined anywhere.
- Table # 5 — the Swarm is missing a Quality value and model count (though the latter may be assumed to be [1]). Also, placing the Swarm in base contact with the unit even though likely neither of them is currently doing a Charge violates a core game rule for no apparent reason.