I enjoyed this and it reminded me of being a young lesbian and seeing Queen of the Damned for the first time and not knowing anything in the world. The religious over tones are really good and reminds me of when your sins are revealed to a group of older women in church. The desire to achieve absolution only to fail to complete what is right in the eyes of those who are 'more faithful' is captured well.
Really delightful to read something from you again!!