I just finished reading and I really loved this! It says a lot about me, but a lot of Eleanor's thoughts resonated with mine, particularly the feeling of not being a misanthrope but just finding People tiring.
That aside, I personally think the two of them are very cutely messed up together. I love the concept of violence and intimacy being mixed together, and the sex scene really scratches that itch for me. I think Milk Puzzle is a very strong contender. Good luck to you with the Game Jam!<3333