ooooh very interesting and promising start!! I really like your writing style and the keyboard mechanics you put in this story! And those little sentences at the top of the page?? love 'em. Can't wait to see where you'll bring us and to discover more of this world. I already love Melanie and Cain <33
p.s. there was a little bug with the questions to Cain, but nothing major
yeah, of course, no problem! i chose "who are you?" and then "Do you at least remember your name". It worked just fine, but when i asked the other questions the answer to the name continued to appear, like in this screenshot