this was amazinggggggggg, so so poignant if that makes any sense... i relate a lot to this, being inside of a speedy car at night, and, well, cis women yeah, as a trans woman, i'm scared of being near them, for many reasons, and it all comes down to that insecurity, that feeling of inadequacy... you nailed a lot of that down to a T!
the writing was also immaculate honestly, i loved it, even if it's a short experience i was left caring about these characters, their story, their lives, especially Dahlia... poor girl, she deserves so much better ;( I won't lie I was caught very much off guard, even if the writing was right there on the wall since the beginning... Also, fuck that guy Brad!!!!!!
Additionally, pls tell ur wife that her music is great! I know she doesnt wanna be credited but like if you two could consider uploading the music somewhere... I (and I believe others here as well) would be grateful bc its so gooooodddddddd!! I hope you win a gazillion toxic yuri dollars!!!!