Thank you, it’s not often we receive such extensive feedback. This endeavor has been very trial-and-error for us and we’re open to making changes.
“there are tons and tons of good examples of awesome text games that are free to play to choose from. (300k words, tons of monsters and world to explore, they dont make you read filler, its mostly actual smut content.)
perhaps consider reaching a wordcount of 20-50K before trying to sell it for actual money.”
Well, I’d be interested in hearing these creators' business models. It seems to me that there are many abandoned projects and burned-out game makers in the adult-oriented space, and as a result I’m reluctant to give away our work for free.
I don’t agree that these games have much in the way of “filler”. The introductions are part of the narrative. And the smut is only interesting because the narrative builds a specific fantasy.
“this is literally worse than a story. atleast a story I can skim.”
It’s no different from any Ren’Py or Twine game, right? You can’t skim those either, as far as I know.
“making 20 3$ copy paste text games and bloating the itch.io search is not the way.”
This is the first game I’ve priced $3. I felt it was a reasonable ask for the work of this game’s writer (Kobold with A Quill). His writing clearly reflects his experience, and he charges appropriately for that.
Unfortunately, itch.io lacks the functionality for users to block content from creators they don’t want to see.