find a way to make your writing gameplay less dry.
3 lines that read at a very slow pace only to press continue (not alot of choice/choice that matters) is not much of a game.
its just a story that cant be read at my reading speed.
short form erotic writing shouldnt be for sale. put it up for free and let people donate.
if you want money, make a product thats worth money,
but I reccomend not polluting the itch search with 90 5k word monster stories.
I believe you guys can take a look at any of the other text games out there and find a way to improve your games.
good luck.