Hey! I sincerely appreciate the feedback about the reading level of the text. I apologize that it’s isolating, because it’s not intended to be.
A big theme of Periphery Synthetic is how it’s your own personal journey. That includes how you interpret the text, and its uncommon words and sentence structures. A thesaurus has always been one of my favorite resources, because it shows how words can have so many meanings! I love learning new words, using and forgetting them, and having to look them up again!
I’m nearly a quarter through writing the expansion. Unfortunately, it’s using the same writing style. It’s not something I’m excited to compromise on. However, I’ll tell you one secret: the expansion includes some perceptions that could be considered a developer commentary mode. It’s not exactly what you’re asking, but I’m very excited to expand the worlds with what I think they mean to me.
Cheers!